Sunday, 12 February 2023

HOME FOR THE FALLEN... (My new poem about Burbage's War Memorial...)

 Home For The Fallen…

(Burbage’s War Memorial…)



A rose garden. Fitting for the fallen 

And the returning. A nook, nature’s intense

Yet intriguing space for remembrance.

The old terraced Burbage dwellings remain

And curiously, individually retain

Their understated, welcoming essence,

Whilst the church spire peeks its presence,

Preaching peace to ease a village’s pain.

And the soldier’s gaze is determined, if sullen…


The figure is pallid, his rifle upturned.

An infantryman, his helmet spurned

For a soft cap, mourns the dead

By a simple bow of his sculpted head…


Pete Ray

11th February 2023




Really liked the layout in Burbage, for the remembrance garden seems surrounded by homes, as if it is at the heart of a community welcoming both returning soldiers and perhaps the souls of fallen comrades too…




The panel inside the garden displays a couple of images of the same scene in previous years and it seemed only right to add my view to those, showing how really, little has changed…




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