Monday, 9 December 2024

MOUSEHOLE/PASSCHENDAELE... (My poem about an old image of Mousehole, Cornwall...)

 Mousehole/Passchendaele…



She strolls gingerly on the stone at the foot of a wall 

Inside Mousehole’s harbour,

Wearing a soft white hat,

Carrying her handbag,

Looking trim in a white summer dress, 

And her incongruous white shoes…

She steps over the weed, the slime, the ropes and the chain,

Passes men in uniform who offer a smile

As she casts a wary eye upon the dank sea

And soft sand, her glances avoiding the gulls.

 Yet she is totally devoid of stress…


He walks gingerly on duck-boards at the foot of a wall

Inside a Passchendaele trench,

Wearing a scarred metal helmet,

Heaving his kit-bag,

Looking gaunt in a khaki battle-dress

And his inappropriate muddied boots…

He steps over the muck, the slime, the ropes and the slain,

Passes death in uniform, soldiers now defiled,

As he casts a weary eye upon the rank pools

And soft mire, his glances avoiding the rats.

Yet he is completely devoid of distress… 


Pete Ray


Looking at an old Mousehole image, I couldn’t help feeling that the young woman on the slippery water’s edge shouldn’t really have been there at all.


And then I thought of a fellow in a World War One trench, treading the duck-boards at Passchendaele, who really ought not to have been there either…

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