On Leave…
(A poem about World War One…)
Stone walls.
Permanence, confidence.
Ceiling falls.
Low oak beams twist imperceptibly
Above rag-rug of dark red offcuts,
Whilst fire-logs spit their anger
Beneath flaming abuse.
This sole source of warmth and light
In November’s room
Glares its defiance and very resistance…
Life stalls.
Pretence, reticence.
Fear appals.
Sad, weary eyes falter deceptively
Over vintage of deep red wine, but
Whilst fire-logs shift asunder
Beneath flames obtuse,
This soul, aglow with warmth and light
In furlough’s doom
Shares its resilience and very existence…
Pete Ray
Ivor Bertie Gurney’s poem ‘Ypres-Minsterworth’ included the following verse, which rather affected me.
‘To think how in some German prison
A boy lies with whom
I might have taken joy full-hearted
Hearing the great boom
Of autumn, watching the fire, talking
Of books in the half-gloom.’
The feeling of pervading darkness outside a cottage, the glow of a log fire within, the delicacy of an expensive red wine and a defiance in conversation, all spurred me on to pen the above in July 2015…
![]() |
| PATERNAL GRANDFATHER... |
I have now revised my original poem…




No comments:
Post a Comment
Note: only a member of this blog may post a comment.