Wednesday, 17 September 2025

PURTON COLLIER... (My poem about one of the hulks beached alongside the River Severn at Purton, Gloucestershire...)

 Purton Collier…



Daubed black,

Like military infiltrators,

Soot-encrusted bargemen hovered.

Expressionless, gawping eyes

Blinked mechanically,

As the mission slithered silently, stalling on tide.


Minds slack,

Like spectral traders,

Grime-encrusted coalmen wavered.

Hopeless, gaping eyes

Gazed abjectly,

As the launch angled inexorably to Severn’s side.


Splintering crack,

Like slaveman’s whip,

Filth-encrusted vessel gouged.

Featureless, shattering prow

Beached firmly,

As its hulk, embedded deeply, salvaged minimal pride.


Changing tack,

Like lost souls,

Smut-encrusted wraiths disembarked. 

Aimless, scaling prow,

Searched vainly,

As their culture evanesced, indiscernibly, their 

immortality cruelly denied…


Pete Ray


Purton, alongside the River Severn, where old boats were left to rot during the 1950s.



One had ‘COLLIER’ clearly marked upon the dried wooden hulk.  


Maybe it was the resting place of a barge, which 

carried coal to Cadbury’s chocolate factory in 

Birmingham, along the canal system. 



I was reminded of the landing craft used on D-Day and imagined the coalmen as the exposed 

Infantrymen… 



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