Tuesday, 1 October 2024

PALLID, DESERTED BLAKENEY... (My new poem about Blakeney Quay, Norfolk...)

 Pallid, Deserted Blakeney…



It had been wet for much of the day.

Drizzle, then persistent fine rain,

Had rendered the marshland a dull, insipid green,

Its creeks hiding in narrow inlets and hollows.

Fewer wading birds were evident, although a stray

Little egret was unable to refrain

From poking around in the mire with industry keen

And prodding busy yellow feet in the shallows.


It had been a low, placid waterway as dusk drew near,

Then, as sea-mist consumed the distant dunes of sand

And offshore wind-farms, an inconspicuous tide

Crept through the Quay, its vessels moored below the road.

It slithered discreetly onto a car-park, oozing grey and severe,

Its imperceptible encroachment, eerie and unplanned,

Causing the desertion of humans with dogs on the side,

Carrying coffee like prizes, the behaviour à la mode…



Pete Ray

30th September 2024… 



Blakeney, Norfolk, on a rainy, gloomy and dull late afternoon and early evening…



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