Tuesday, 5 August 2025

WE GOTTA GET OUT OF THIS PLACE... (My new poem inspired by a Leigh Lambert painting...)

 We Gotta Get Out Of This Place…

(Inspired by Leigh Lambert’s painting…)



A very few vehicles parked hint at changes being made

To the British industrial day. Why, even the industrial

Chimneys seem to have retreated

And a once glum, smoggy sky hovering over lives in shade

Has cleared to puff out neat white clouds, surreal

Above the factorial housing and the gossip being repeated.


The very few children hint at more freedom being gained,

Spilled from an upturned bin and a rubbish life,

An escape from the playing of pavement games like

Hopscotch and skipping, restricted and restrained,

Yet causing a minimum of neighbourhood strife

Whilst kicking a ball about or riding a three-wheeled bike…  


And The Animals watch as the burden of childhood in grey

 Loosens its shackles to form a cheery parade

Of kids on scooters and bikes in a spectacular array 

Of colours, turning a corner to the future, no longer afraid.


They are getting out of that place, if it’s the last thing they do,

From dull industrial backstreets into territory new…


Pete Ray

4th August 2025…


MY STREET, BAMVILLE ROAD, WARD END, BIRMINGHAM.
VIRTUALLY NO CARS. CLEAN PAVEMENTS.
I AM WITH RON, THE NEXT DOOR NEIGHBOUR... 



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