Sunday, 5 October 2025

PORTHTOWAN: NEEDLES IN THE GALE... (My new poem about being caught in a storm at Porthtowan, Cornwall, 4th October 2025...)

 Porthtowan: Needles In The Gale…



Buffeted on cliffs above Porthtowan beach by a raucous gale,

My eyes teary, jacket billowing and bellowing its own wrath,

The sky at least was bright and gannets patrolled across a broiling, wild ocean,

White bodies glinting in the autumnal sunlight, then undulating,

As breaking waves rose, roared and threw themselves down into an orgy of chaos and noise. 


As I strode forth along the East Cliff’s coast-path, the tail

 Wind’s power was surprising, venting its vile wrath. 

But no birds were visible, indeed no wildlife at all, no motion,

Except the extreme worship of plants and bushes, prostrating 

Themselves before the vainglorious storm and thrashing with the minimum of poise…  


And then the sky darkened, as leaden clouds were drawn

Quickly landward by the ferocious gale and I turned 

To make a stumbling descent towards the beach, strewn 

By yellowish sea foam, its sand slung into my eyes, which burned.

Then needling hail spattered my face like stings as I scrambled

Along, almost slipping on loose stones which tumbled

Beneath my faltering, slithering strides, until quite suddenly 

The shower ended and, dripping wet, I trudged, forlornly 

Across awkward dunes to the sixty-three steps I needed to ascend

In order to reach shelter and there my extreme embarrassment to mend…    



Pete Ray

4th October 2025…  








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