Wednesday, 10 January 2024

THE UNCERTAINTY... (My new poem inspired by the painting of Ksenya Insomnia...)

 The Uncertainty…

(Inspired by Ksenya Istomina’s painting…)



A night patrol. A tree-lined lane

In darkness. Like charred remnants

From a recent barrage. Blackened

Uprights, foliage silhouetted by curious

Lights. An encampment? The enemy?


The uncertainty. The mental strain.

In silence. Scarred combatants

In no man’s land, of war sickened,

Contrite, watchful, dry mouths. Anxious.

Fright. The prospect of a slow death in agony…


Pete Ray

9th January 2024


The moody scene made me think of World War 1 and a scouting party moving cautiously along a tree-lined lane.

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