Wednesday, 30 April 2025

HITTING THE WALL... (My poem about Mousehole, Cornwall, December 2012...)

 Hitting the Wall…

(The sea crashing at Mousehole, Cornwall & a shell exploding during World War 1…)



I was running I reckon,

Helmet pressing damp hair

Onto a confused, terrified head,

Itchy and lousy.

Stiff strap irritating the morning’s shaving cut

To bleed, incongruously.


I was dodging I realised,

Boots scattering loose dirt

Onto a bemused, petrified land,

Seething and drooling.

Bloodied puttee rubbing marching’s blistered heel

To raw, rapaciously.


I was rising I recall,

Rifle leaving torn fingers

Into black, smoked air,

Rising and hissing.

Tossed body flying at maiming shell’s detonation,

Too slow, heinously.


It was hunching I remarked,

Surf heaving white froth

Onto black, glossed rock,

Thrashing and slapping.

Deflected surge slinging the gleaming spray,

To cascade, tenuously...


Pete Ray

December 2012… 




Spray struck a rocky outcrop of St Clement’s Island, off Mousehole harbour.



 It rose spectacularly and seemed to fall in slow 

motion, much as I would imagine myself thrown 

upwards by a World War 1 explosion, all happening too slowly to quantify... 

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