Tuesday, 20 January 2026

STORMY PORTOBELLO... (My new poem inspired by a Sarah Evans painting...)

 Stormy Portobello…

(Inspired by another Sarah Evans painting…)



The figures on the harshly weathered sand, plundered

By a rogue sea-tide, only serve to extenuate the enormity

Of Portobello’s storm-battered coastline, overseen by a gale,

Blowing, tousling, teeming and wildly spiralling the sullen rain. 

Grim, craggy outcrops of rock deflect the currents and take the strain

Of the lashing ocean and yet, looking at the surging surf, I cannot fail

To harbour a desire to bodyboard there and feel the sea’s intensity

Powering me landward, as behind me the roar of violent waves thundered… 


Pete Ray…

19th January 2026…


Sarah’s parents and Alf the dog are present in a dramatic Edinburgh scene…

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