Monday, 26 May 2025

MUDDLE AMONGST THE RUBBLE... (My poem about Porthoustock, Cornwall, October 2009...)

 Muddle Amongst The Rubble… 

(Porthoustock, Cornwall, October 2009…)



A gloomy tide barely broke onto an uninviting shore,

Etched black by sucked residue

On sombre, hardened sand.

Humped tarmac road hardly split an unwelcoming beach,

Defiled repugnant by broken rubble

Across the flat, parking strand.


The solemn dereliction failed to enhance the cove’s 

appeal,

Rising stark and of hideous design,

 A thick, high, dank wall.

Scarred working quarry barely embellished the 

overall vista,

Where oppressive, deposited boulders awaited 

collection,

Around the tyre-hung harbour’s gall.


A random craft could not compensate for this 

unsightly shore,

Creased and marked by winding gear

Upon pungent, crushed shell.

Patched, ill-repaired hovels crudely housed their rusting winches,

Slimy brown from persistent tides

And nestled beneath a high cliff’s cell.


The clustered hamlet failed to harmonise with its 

monstrous seaboard,

Placid cottages standing firm and white

In a tight, pleasant huddle,

Contrasting furiously and incongruous with the nearby dilapidation.

And an old lifeboat house, turned village hall

Presided knowingly over Porthoustock’s heinous muddle…


Pete Ray



In fact, I really liked Porthoustock...











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