Sunday, 18 May 2025

PIT PONIES... (My poem about Port Quin, near Port Isaac, Cornwall...)

 Pit Ponies…

(Port Quin, Cornwall, 2008…)



Mist dampened my hair

As I stumbled upon

The two disused shafts,

A pair of abandoned mines,

Fenced, ringed and evacuated,

Swallowing murky draughts…


Fog deluded my perception

As I peered into

The sad derelict wells,

A brace of vacant workings,

Fortified, encircled and forsaken,

Gulping nebulous swells…


Gloom distorted my expectation

As I strolled onward.

The nine distant ponies,

A pair of distinctive hues,

Foraged, grazed and mesmerised,

Swallowing obsolete felonies…


Miasma deceived my eyes

As I followed blindly

The pit-ponies’ acceptance.

A brace of disparate souls

Filed, manacled and coerced,

Gulping subjugation’s deference…



Pete Ray





Port Quin, Cornwall and walking towards Epphaven, finding two fenced mining shafts and the wild ponies of two colours only. 




As I followed them on a single track, back towards the shafts, I felt like I was one of them, doomed to labour in appalling, lawbreaking conditions…







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