Tuesday, 2 December 2025

PULLING ME AWAY... (My new poem inspired by a Michelle Underwood painting...)

 Pulling Me Away…

(Inspired by Michelle Underwood’s painting…)



There is something unobtainable there pulling me away

From the stumbling pathway I have followed, directly,

Or indirectly. And it makes me wonder,

And muse, and evaluate, and ponder,

For there is something unapproachable there tugging me awry. 

I linger a distance away, huddled, infatuated, intently

Surveying the scene from behind a stripped silhouetted tree, under 

Which, maybe its last red leaf lies, by winds finally ripped asunder… 


Tracks prod dashed lines across thick snow towards the door

And images of a rare wintering badger, or foraging fox, or inquisitive deer

Flick though my mind’s eye, as closer to the dwelling unwittingly I draw,

Intoxicated, excited and tormented by fear…


Pulling me away from a semblance of comfort and peace,

Enticing me towards a promise, albeit cold and bleak,

I encroach it, unable to resist the temptation, the beauty, the tease,

To find the thrill of redemption, which I have constantly laboured to seek…   


Pete Ray…

2nd December 2025…


The painting had a strange effect upon me…


The dwelling took my focus and I wondered…


It seemed like my nemesis, my fear, my joy, 

my end-place…

   

    

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